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Here's an early version of one of my more recent stories. I'm planning on re-working it a bit to reduce the fetish aspects and increase the Horror and try to find a market for it.
Lisanne Norman gave me a stack of notes on it, which I have yet to really go through and work on. I've had other projects.
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Originally, this started with the mental image of a female diver exploring a sunken ship, and finding herself chained and whipped by ghostly slavers, whose whip passed through her gear. Originally she was meant to be some vacationer, but that didn't give the story a real place to gel other than "Wrong Place, Wrong Time". So the idea bobbed around in the back of my head for a long time until it collided with the image of Beyonce as Foxy Cleopatra in a wetsuit in that Austin Powers movie.... Then it practically wrote itself in a day or two.
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Marked Mature (Warning) for Violence/Gore. Not really gory, but it's definitely not Nancy Drew.
Lisanne Norman gave me a stack of notes on it, which I have yet to really go through and work on. I've had other projects.
Spoilers
Originally, this started with the mental image of a female diver exploring a sunken ship, and finding herself chained and whipped by ghostly slavers, whose whip passed through her gear. Originally she was meant to be some vacationer, but that didn't give the story a real place to gel other than "Wrong Place, Wrong Time". So the idea bobbed around in the back of my head for a long time until it collided with the image of Beyonce as Foxy Cleopatra in a wetsuit in that Austin Powers movie.... Then it practically wrote itself in a day or two.
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Marked Mature (Warning) for Violence/Gore. Not really gory, but it's definitely not Nancy Drew.
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every comment I can come up with look stupid after reading such a good text. Your story telling, description all is leaving me out of word.
a great and scary(in a good way) story, got to be a traumatizing event, every person that where not there say it an hallucination but there are other proof that it wasn't.
a great and scary(in a good way) story, got to be a traumatizing event, every person that where not there say it an hallucination but there are other proof that it wasn't.